In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
Previously, more and more
people
resided in a
small countryside. These days Correct article usage
apply
people
live in big cities where they are familiar with few people
in that area. i
strongly believe that both cases Change the capitalization
I
has
its pros and cons.
Change the verb form
have
Firstly
,nowadyas
it is becoming Correct your spelling
nowadays
an increasingly common habit aits
Correct the article-noun agreement
increasingly common habit aits
an increasingly common habit ait
drwmong
some individuals moving to Correct your spelling
drawing
large
countryside. They prefer living Add an article
the large
in
there. Change preposition
apply
However
, it has negative and positive sides. For instance
, living in a large cities
could be more beneficial with its different Correct the article-noun agreement
large cities
a large city
kind
of opportunities, Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
such
as occupations, different
stores, and Correct word choice
and different
also
it can provide community
with gas, water and other things. Add an article
the community
However
, when it comes to its drawbacks, there can be more traffic jams, issues
with air Correct word choice
and issues
pollutions
. Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
Moreover
, some mankind do not know each others
, and Change to a singular noun
other
this
is a major problem,
because they cannot help each Remove the comma
apply
others
in any case.
Change to a singular noun
other
On the other hand
, reside
in small villages would be comfortable. BecauseWrong verb form
residing
,
it has more comfy sides to live. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, most folks know one another, and also
they might support mutual. Furthermore
, there are
Change the verb form
is
sense
of traditions and friendships. Add an article
a sense
the sense
Moreover
, there are different kind
of gardens, forests, and Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
also
mountain places. Besides
, there is no air pollutions
or traffic jam problems. Only fresh air and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
people
raise cattle. Therefore
, they can relax and enjoy
. So, when it comes to its disadvantages, it would be a little bit Correct pronoun usage
themselvesenjoy
challenge
. Replace the word
challenging
For instance
, if a person wants to
something special, he or she cannot find it. BecauseChange preposition
apply
,
Remove the comma
apply
countryside
does not Add an article
the countryside
provides
with anything else. And there are no more Change the verb form
provide
taxi
and preparing things.
Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
To sum up
, as you already know, both sides are equal. That is
why in my perception, you have to choose one side which you prefer.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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