In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

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Previously, more and more
people
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resided in
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small countryside. These days
people
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live in big cities where they are familiar with few
people
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in that area.
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strongly believe that both cases
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its pros and cons.
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,
nowadyas
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nowadays
it is becoming
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drwmong
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drawing
some individuals moving to
large
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the large
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countryside. They prefer living
in
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there.
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, it has negative and positive sides.
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, living in
a large cities
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large cities
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could be more beneficial with its different
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of opportunities,
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as occupations,
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and different
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stores, and
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it can provide
community
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the community
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with gas, water and other things.
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, when it comes to its drawbacks, there can be more traffic jams,
issues
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and issues
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with air
pollutions
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.
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, some mankind do not know each
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, and
this
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is a major problem
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because they cannot help each
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in any case.
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,
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in small villages would be comfortable. Because
,
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it has more comfy sides to live.
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, most folks know one another, and
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they might support mutual.
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, there
are
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sense
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a sense
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of traditions and friendships.
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, there are different
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kinds
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of gardens, forests, and
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mountain places.
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, there is no air
pollutions
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pollution
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or traffic jam problems. Only fresh air and
people
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raise cattle.
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, they can relax and
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. So, when it comes to its disadvantages, it would be a little bit
challenge
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.
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, if a person wants
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something special, he or she cannot find it. Because
,
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countryside
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the countryside
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does not
provides
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with anything else. And there are no more
taxi
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and preparing things.
To sum up
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, as you already know, both sides are equal.
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why in my perception, you have to choose one side which you prefer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sense of community
  • Bond
  • Close-knit
  • Tight-knit
  • Belonging
  • Familiarity
  • Security
  • Support system
  • Social connections
  • Look out for
  • Have someone's back
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