I feel this book is likely to influence others as it includes real stories of experiences shared by some famous celebrities which are quite compelling.

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to express my ideas about a paper article which has published
last
Sunday newspaper.
According to
your paper,you have requested ideas from readers' regarding the
book
that influenced them most.
Firstly
, the name of the
book
is "The Traveller" which has written by Mr
R.Raj
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R. Raj
who is a famous zoologist. The
book
has described what are the importance of travelling. Apart from that, it has
enthuas
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enthused
us to visit places which have not been discovered by others. When I was reading the
book
, it inspired me to travel more around the country. Because the author has clearly explained using scientific evidence.
This
book
was suggested by one of my university friends who loves to travel more. I think
,
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this
book
will be able to impress other readers
also
.
Additionally
, it makes reason to travel over the country to observe the natural beauty of the traveller's naked eye. If you need
further
information in
this
regard, please do not hesitate to contact me.
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