Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have recently made a purchase on your online website and it was received with damaged condition. I have raised several

complaint

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to your customer care service and so far there is no resolution yet, I would like your immediate attention on

this

matter. I

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ordered iPhone 14 pro on 5th May 2023, the order reference number is 25481264. The package was delivered on time but it was damaged during the shipping. After opening it, the iPhone was in bad condition, I immediately took

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picture of it and initiated the refund process and shipped the mobile back to your company.

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everything has been done from my side, I didn't get the refund back and it's almost 3 months now. I have called

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customer care multiple times and none have given me the proper resolution. I would appreciate your immediate attention on

this

matter and

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me with a favourable solution. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, David

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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