Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have recently made a purchase on your online website and it was received with damaged condition. I have raised several

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to your customer care service and so far there is no resolution yet, I would like your immediate attention on

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ordered iPhone 14 pro on 5th May 2023, the order reference number is 25481264. The package was delivered on time but it was damaged during the shipping. After opening it, the iPhone was in bad condition, I immediately took

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picture of it and initiated the refund process and shipped the mobile back to your company.

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everything has been done from my side, I didn't get the refund back and it's almost 3 months now. I have called

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customer care multiple times and none have given me the proper resolution. I would appreciate your immediate attention on

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me with a favourable solution. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, David

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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