You work (or an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in anothor country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his or her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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to express my interest to have a training period of six months at our head office situated in America.

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with, I want to get my training done in the main branch because, as you know I recently clear my Sustainable Business Management exam. Now, I need to have training in the domain of sustainable management.

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, I did some research and it come to my knowledge that the head office is the perfect place for my training. Miss.Lori Michelson is ready to take on my job responsibilities in my absence.

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, I will be available on the phone in case she has any questions or doubts. I will keep checking my email

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I am away from work. I will

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if you contact head office and organize my training with their sustainable co-ordinator for six months. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Raveena

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

158 words

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