Schools should take more responsibility for the health of today's children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement.

Health

plays a vital role in everyone's life. It

is believe

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that schools have to make more careful and responsible for students

health

. I think it is

helpful

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step taken

from

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the school but

parents

should

also

responsible

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for the

health

and growth of their

children

.

Firstly

,

children

spend

their

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most of

the

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time in school,

as a result

, it is a good option to teach the

children

about their

health

, as they can learn what is healthy food and exercise to make their body fit. Schools should organize monthly

check up

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camps in order to check the

students

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health

also

they come to know about the pros and cons and

health

issues by showing them some charts. Teachers play a vital role to enhance the level of eating healthy food by making a

weakly

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lunch time table.

Also

,

children's

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are not doing any outdoor activities because they are lazy nowadays so playground activities

also

help them to grow fast . The main reason why I think it should

the

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responsibility of the

parents

to look into the

health

of

the

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their

children

is that no one knows better than their

parents

because sometimes

children

are

introvert

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. As a result,

parents

is the only one with whom they will share their

health

issues

for example

period pain which can be

cure

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by taking some medicine or by doing exercises.

Parents

have a power that they can feel the

real

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of their

children

. They will automatically come to know that the

children

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is sick or not feeling well. In conclusion, I would say that it is equally

responsibility

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of the schools

as well as

parents

to look into the heath of the

children

.