People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons of this?
Most
people
in this
era which are
Change the verb form
show
show
both their privacy and professional life
. Everybody has a reason
for this
. Overall
, there are positive and negative opinions for this
Correct determiner usage
these
people
.
The positive opinions for support this
issue are the right to get their own happiness and the need for
improve their social Change preposition
to
life
. Every human has tendency
to get happiness in Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
life
. There are many different ways to pursue this
. For example
, an influencer in social media is promote her intimate life
and work
to get more Correct subject-verb agreement
works
people
attention. Change noun form
people's
This
action will increase her followers. Maybe this
is the reason
why some people
are glad to show
others about both their private and work life
. The second reason
is the social need as a human being. People
fuse their personal and public life
to get more friends that have same
ideas or hobbies so they get more friends. Correct article usage
the same
For example
, a woman that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show
her book collections Change the verb form
shows
in
Change preposition
on
instagram
to find a new relative that Change the capitalization
Instagram
love
reading too. Change the verb form
loves
This
will help people
in their social life
.
On the otherside
, the fusion of personal and public Correct your spelling
other side
life
also
has negative impacts such
as a risk to
Change preposition
of
criminal
and Replace the word
crime
life
disorder. Replace the word
liver
People
that open their both personal and public life
can attract a criminal to rob or kill them. A woman that show
their office or home address can invite a thief or a bad guy to find her at her Change the verb form
shows
adresses
. Correct your spelling
addresses
address
This
is a dangerous situation that
caused by Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
issue. The other reason
is a life
disorder that can happen in this
mix
Change the verb form
mixed
life
. Person
will confuse about their Fix the agreement mistake
People
life
because there is no separation between privacy and publicy
. Correct your spelling
publicity
publicly
This
is not good for mental health.
In conclusion, every action in this
life
always has pro
and Fix the agreement mistake
pros
contradiction
. As long as Fix the agreement mistake
contradictions
people
happy
to do whatever activity or lifestyle, they have Add a missing verb
are happy
do
it.Fix the infinitive
to do
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...