The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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I agree with
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entertainment
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prefer
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a screen. They say that a book is the best friend that you could have
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about research it's easier to
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everyone to choose what fits more to them. I agree with the prediction but I
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