You work at home anda have a problem with a piece or equipment that you use for your jon. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter . describe the problem with the equipment . explain how this problem is affecting you work . say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the problem with the
computer
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bought on 11th
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july
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July
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. I have purchased
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computer
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. When
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was handed the
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was assured by the dealer that
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central processing was in perfect condition and everything was working fine. To my
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, after working for just one day, processing stopped working. After the
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, my work went backwards. I didn't finish my work on time so my boss was angry. Despite the fact that
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already contacted the company about the problem a week ago nothing had been fine yet. I request an immediate replacement
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the
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and expect a reply from you as soon as possible. I
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believe
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deserve an apology and
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appropriate compensation for the inconvenience caused to me. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.
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