You work at home anda have a problem with a piece or equipment that you use for your jon. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter . describe the problem with the equipment . explain how this problem is affecting you work . say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the problem with the
computer
which Use synonyms
i
bought on 11th Change the capitalization
I
or
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of
july
.
I have purchased Change the capitalization
July
was
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apply
the
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a
computer
. When Use synonyms
i
was handed the Change the capitalization
I
computer
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i
was assured by the dealer that Change the capitalization
I
a
central processing was in perfect condition and everything was working fine. To my Remove the article
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suprise
, after working for just one day, processing stopped working.
After the Correct your spelling
surprise
computer
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crashes
, my work went backwards. I didn't finish my work on time so my boss was angry.
Despite the fact that Wrong verb form
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i
already contacted the company about the problem a week ago nothing had been fine yet. I request an immediate replacement Change the capitalization
I
or
the Correct your spelling
of
computer
and expect a reply from you as soon as possible. I Use synonyms
also
believe Linking Words
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deserve an apology and Change the capitalization
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an
appropriate compensation for the inconvenience caused to me.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.Remove the article
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite