The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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The charts present a comparison of mean data between temperature and rainfall in a particular city in India during a year. In General, from the measurement
this
city experienced the highest precipitate from May to July had soared significantly,
however
, the temperature measured gradually fell in the same period. Looking into more detail, in the first quarter was recorded the rain occurred gradually increased from around 20
mm
to 40
mm
, in ,addition the following quarter it was counted to be soaring roughly by 200
mm
, and the peak in July was 325
mm
and the next month fall into 300 in September, and sharply plummet In December 20
mm
.
On the other hand
, for temperature measured gap in a year is only 10 degrees Celcius from
initial
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to the end of the period.
Besides
, From January to
May
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it climbed from 20 to 30. After that, the city encountered the climate slightly decline from June to December at 20 Celcius.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mm with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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