In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no denying fact that the phenomena of the future all cars,buses and trucks will be ubiquitous across the globe
due to
its
importance. Correct pronoun usage
their
Majority
of folks are in Correct article usage
The majority
the
favour of Correct article usage
apply
this
statement due to
its number of merits. However
some of the people highlight its demerits first. In my Add a comma
,However
further
paragraphs, advantages
and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.
Initiating with the benefits of the same, the first and foremost key benefit is that less car crushing will happen and I think we will be much safer if Correct article usage
the advantages
those kind
of cars were produced. Change the determiner
that kind
those kinds
For
example
Add a comma
,example
in
a highway you can sleep as well if you get tired of driving Change preposition
on
the
car, bus even Correct article usage
a
trucks
.Another benefit which can strike the minds of the people can be shown in the pollution or environment of the country Fix the agreement mistake
truck
instead
of using petrol or diesel you can cite an example of electricity and it will be much better
On its darker side, some of the drawbacks which makes
it problematic are, first if you were in Correct subject-verb agreement
make
a
unstable country for electricity Change the article
an
such
as African countries
you can resume your driving and spot the place that you want. Fix the agreement mistake
country
Secondly
it’s more expensive to buy Add a comma
,Secondly
For instance
fuel is much cheaper.However
, the
Correct article usage
apply
electrical
cars are high in cost. Replace the word
electric
Last
but not Add a comma
,Last
the
least, Correct article usage
apply
there’s
some environmental impacts too.
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros Change the verb form
there are
can
be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bag of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated.Correct word choice
nor can
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