In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying fact that the phenomena of the future all cars,buses and trucks will be ubiquitous across the globe
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some of the people highlight its demerits first. In my
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and disadvantages of the same will be discussed. Initiating with the benefits of the same, the first and foremost key benefit is that less car crushing will happen and I think we will be much safer if
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of cars were produced.
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a highway you can sleep as well if you get tired of driving
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car, bus even
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.Another benefit which can strike the minds of the people can be shown in the pollution or environment of the country
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you can resume your driving and spot the place that you want.
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it’s more expensive to buy
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fuel is much cheaper.
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cars are high in cost.
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but not
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some environmental impacts too. In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros
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be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bag of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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