The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The table illustrates the amount of food consumed by three types of harvest (
wheat
, maize
and rice
) by the countries (Cambodia
, Poland
, Egypt and Mexico
). Units are measured in calories per person per day (cal/p
/d).
Overall
, the major consumption
of each kind of crop is various. The frequency of eating rice
is the highest in Cambodia
ca. 1445 cal/p
/d. On the other hand
, wheat
is the most popular crop in Poland
, the value
is 1095 cal/p
/d. According to
this
tendency, the consumption
of maize
has an amount of 1083 cal/p
/d in Mexico
.
Regarding the second most popular crop, Egypt has a consumption
value
of 501 cal/p
/d for rice
, while
Mexico
has a value
of 57 cal/p
/d. The consumption
of wheat
in Poland
is 865 cal/p
/d, while
in Mexico
, the amount is 275 cal/p
/d. In Egypt, maize
has a utilization value
of 578 cal/p
/d, while
in Cambodia
the value
is 103 cal/p
/d.
The lowest value
of rice
consumption
is in Poland
, which is 19 cal/p
/d. The values for wheat
and maize
are 18 cal/p
/d in Cambodia
and 0 cal/p
/d in Poland
, respectively.Submitted by daria.kukurudza on
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