The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts display a hospitality service that was experienced by a hundred
Parkway's
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Parkway
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costumers
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customers
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Hotel during 5 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there were five categories in the question forms,
as a result
, visitors felt good
as well as
excellent throughout stayed in the hotel. looking into more details, since the initial period of survey in the year 2005 the majority of costumer was
pleasant
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a pleasant
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stay at the hotel.
This
can be seen that almost
two thirds
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per cent of them showed
satisfy
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.
Besides
, in the next 5 ,years it dramatically increased for each category of pleasant which were recorded as excellent, good, and satisfactory at 28 %, 39 %, and 17% respectively.
On the other hand
, the unpleasant feeling only took for the least of visitors at 20 per cent in 2005.
In addition
, in the next period in
2010
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it became slightly decreased
of
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number where it was recorded at only 16 per cent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • customer service
  • questionnaire
  • survey
  • respondents
  • rating scale
  • hospitality
  • customer satisfaction
  • comparison
  • data
  • trends
  • improvement
  • deterioration
  • feedback
  • service areas
  • hospitality industry
  • guest experience
  • satisfaction level
  • to rate
  • significant
  • frequency
  • percentage
  • chart
  • bar graph
  • pie chart
  • analysis
  • conclusion
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