It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both thesis and give your own opinion.

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Many
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think that we all have some kinds of
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when we are born, and it
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a lot for our lives.
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, can not we be good at
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explain
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of view and my opinion.
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hand, there are some reasons why
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think that talents decide the
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ability
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firstly
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, we can learn much faster when we have a
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, students who have a talent
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music,
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can easily understand the melody and play the instrument well
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compare
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, they
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on that part
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it is fun and
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fascinating
without no reason from their childhood.
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, there are some stories about
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genius who have never been educated, but they make huge results which make
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surprised.
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, some
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think
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people
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a
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good
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or musicians. At
first,
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we can hear the story of
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successful
people
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who were not good at
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because of their effort to learn about
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something
.
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, if we teach in the right way, students can achieve their
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even
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feel hard to learn
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. In my opinion, enough
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can make
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do something well, but
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all. Even if they learned with
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curriculum, they can not be the best without talent. Especially in
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, music and art area, a
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from
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birth is
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basic ability,
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because
mostly only
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people
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can make
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.
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, when
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want to
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be outstanding
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in
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area, both high talents and
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are
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necessary
. In summary, not
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only
talent but
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proper
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are important to be just good in some part.
However
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,
education
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can not make the best result without a
gift
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in some areas.
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