The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main Features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph highlights information about the amount of holiday-makers who called on a special Caribbean
island
, over a seven-year
period between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a dramatic upward trend in the amount
of total travellers and Change the quantifier
number
although
the guests staying on the island
experienced a fluctuation direction, there was a sharp increase in luxury ships
stayers.
Looking at the details, in the first Change the noun form
ship
year
, only 1 million
nations travelled to the island
and then
there was a consistent increase year
on year
and the ratio remained stable with 2.7 million
from 2015 to 2016 but it did not stopped
and hit a peak in 2017 with 3.5 Change the verb form
stop
million
visitors.
Regarding to
voyager, it started Remove the preposition
apply
around
0.3 Change preposition
at around
million
and following
this
it fluctuated Add a comma
,this
the
next three years but after that step by Change preposition
for the
step
the percentage grew and stopped Add a comma
,step
in
2 Change preposition
at
million
which proven
that it beat the stay category in 2017. Correct your spelling
proved
Conversely
, the island
stayers were ranked second in 2010 and it remained stable in 2011 and
after that the figure rose to 1.5 Correct word choice
apply
million
but in 2016 decreased to over 1 million
and subsequently
, it again improved to 1.5 in the last
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, year, million with synonyms.
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