The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates
about
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data about the activities of graduated students after getting their certificates from one university and
table
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the table
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also
highlights information about the amount of the
incomes
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income
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which was earned by anthropology graduates after five years in
this
field.
Overall
, it can be seen that over half of them had chosen
full-time
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a full-time
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job
while
having part-time work
along with
a master's degree was the least selected option and regarding
to
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the table, the type of employment that received the highest
income
(over 75$) were freelance consultants and the least
income
related to private companies.
According to
the chart, the highest portion was related to full-time industry with 52% and it was followed by part-time
job
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jobs
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with only 15%.
In addition
, the unemployed
students'
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ratio was 12% which was followed by full-time
postgrand
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postgrad
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study and not known categories with exactly the same amount with 8% and
finally
, the percentage of both studying and working
category
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was just 5%. Looking at the details, proven by the table freelance consultants and
government
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sector both had
a similar proportions
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a similar proportion
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with 5%
about
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the lowest
income
.
Conversely
, nearly over half of employees had the highest
income
(100,000$) and regarding
to
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private companies the ratio of workers who had
on
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an
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average salary was 35% and only 10% of them earned the lowest
income
(25,000$)
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