The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line chart highlights information about
portion
of housework with electronic gadgets and the second one is about the amount of time Add an article
a portion
the portion
which
spend Correct pronoun usage
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for
household chores during a week in one country from 1920 to 2012.
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on
Overall
, it can be seen that there were upward trends in three electronic appliances over the period in question with the exception of washing
machine because of slight fluctuations and in the second line chart we can see Add an article
the washing
steady
decrease Correct article usage
a steady
about
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in
amount
of time for cleaning.
Looking at details, the lowest percentage of electronic giant is Add an article
the amount
about
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refrigerator
with around 2% in 1920 and in the same way, washing machine and vacuum cleaner ratios were 40% and 30% Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
in
turn. In Change preposition
apply
this
way, in 1920, refrigerator
hit the peak Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
with
100% and ten years later Vacuum Change preposition
at
cleaner
hit the top percentage Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
with
100% and it remained steady from 2000 to 2019, so the Change preposition
at
used
of electronic devices for housework showed that the amount of time which spend for cleaning decrease steadily with 50% in 1920 to 11%in 2019.Replace the word
use
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