The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
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the
sales
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of two Fairtrade-labelled items in five European
countries
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in 1999 and 2004:
coffee
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and
bananas
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.
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,
coffee
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sales
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increased in all the
countries
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in 2004 compared to 1999, especially in the
UK
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sales
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of
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item were highest compared to the other nations.
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, in Sweden and Denmark,
sales
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of
bananas
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experienced a downward trend during the selected period. It can be seen obviously from the table that the dramatic increase in
coffee
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consumption was
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in the
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UK
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, which was
making
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up from 1.5 to 20
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millions
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of
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euros
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in 1999 and 2004 respectively. In 1999, the sale of
coffee
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in the
UK
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was just making up 1.5
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millions
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of
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euros
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, which was half of the
sales
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that
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observed in Switzerland. Switzerland at that time was the country with the highest
coffee
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sales
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accounting for exactly 3
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millions
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of
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euros
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. After 5 years, the
sales
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of
coffee
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in these
countries
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increases. To be more specific, the
sales
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in
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UK
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the UK
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go up dramatically to reach a peak at 20
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
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in the year 2004, which was almost double
than
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the combined
sales
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amount in the remaining four
countries
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. It is
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evident that banana
sales
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from 1999 to 2004 showed a declining tendency in Sweden and Denmark.
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, the biggest amount of
bananas
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was
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in Switzerland with 15
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millions
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of
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euros
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in 1999 and increased by more than 3 times in 2004-making up the value of 47
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millions
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euros
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.
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,
bananas
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sales
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in the
UK
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and Belgium
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went up, comprising
to
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5.5 and 4 million
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respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, besides".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, countries, coffee, bananas, uk, millions, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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