The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table
compare
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compares
sales
of two Fairtrade-labelled items in five European countries
in 1999 and 2004: coffee
and bananas
.
Overall
, coffee
sales
increased in all the countries
in 2004 compared to 1999, especially in the UK
sales
of this
item were highest compared to the other nations. Besides
, in Sweden and Denmark, sales
of bananas
experienced a downward trend during the selected period.
It can be seen obviously from the table that the dramatic increase in coffee
consumption was the
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in the
UK
, which was making
up from 1.5 to 20 Change the form of the verb
made
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
in 1999 and 2004 respectively. In 1999, the sale of coffee
in the UK
was just making up 1.5 millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
, which was half of the sales
that
observed in Switzerland. Switzerland at that time was the country with the highest Correct pronoun usage
apply
coffee
sales
accounting for exactly 3 millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
. After 5 years, the sales
of coffee
in these countries
increases. To be more specific, the sales
in UK
go up dramatically to reach a peak at 20 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
in the year 2004, which was almost double than
the combined Change preposition
apply
sales
amount in the remaining four countries
.
It is also
evident that banana sales
from 1999 to 2004 showed a declining tendency in Sweden and Denmark. Whereas
, the biggest amount of bananas
was consuming
in Switzerland with 15 Wrong verb form
consumed
millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
in 1999 and increased by more than 3 times in 2004-making up the value of 47 millions
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million
euros
. Besides
, bananas
sales
in the UK
and Belgium also
went up, comprising to
5.5 and 4 million Change preposition
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euros
respectively.Submitted by Minh Ngoc
on
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