The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
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Given bar graph depicts some information about working individuals in two different years 1995 and 2005 respectively across nations namely Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, the United Kingdom, New Zealand
as well as
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The USA.
Overall
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, as it can ostensibly be seen, the ratio of
employment
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in both genders have been increased vividly in each country .
It is clear that
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the number of male employees is higher than females in both years of all countries. in the 10-year period of
this
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illusion, the three first countries are experiencing around 10 per cent of growth in their
employment
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for both men and women
while
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the UK, New Zealand and the USA have a different trend. In the UK male
employment
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reaches about 18% high whilst females bar witnessed almost 12% peak in the same period. Numbers in New Zealand and the USA are roughly the same. men's percentage of
employment
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in 2005 is around 70% in all countries except for Iceland and Switzerland which are standing for first and second most
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rates during
this
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period with almost 83% and 77% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words employment with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rates
  • economic indicators
  • comparison
  • trends
  • improvements
  • declines
  • anomalies
  • fluctuating
  • economic policy
  • financial conditions
  • technological advancements
  • educational levels
  • standards of living
  • poverty rates
  • well-being
  • implications
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