Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration while others think it is a waste of money.DiScuss both views
Celebration seems
as
a festival because of the way they are performed and a way of bringing Change preposition
like
people
together.majority believe that it is paramount to spend lavishly on a family celebration Use synonyms
while
others Linking Words
believes
Change the verb form
believe
otherwise
.Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both views and my notion.
On Linking Words
one
hand,many think it is important to spend too much Correct article usage
the one
money
on family Use synonyms
occasion
.Fix the agreement mistake
occasions
This
is because these days, Linking Words
people
rarely get Use synonyms
time
to be with each other and it is through family ceremony they spend Use synonyms
time
together.Use synonyms
For instance
, an uncle of mine who lives in Linking Words
other
country comes home Correct quantifier usage
another
every
family gathering to spend Change preposition
to every
time
with the family and he Use synonyms
spend
a lot of Change the verb form
spends
money
whenever he is around.Use synonyms
hence
there is Linking Words
need
to spend Correct article usage
a need
time
with the family
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others think Linking Words
spend
Wrong verb form
spending
money
Use synonyms
in
a family celebration is a waste of Change preposition
on
time
.Use synonyms
This
is because Linking Words
of
some family occasion is just one day and Change preposition
apply
people
at times spend a lot of Use synonyms
money
which can be for donations rather than spending it lavishly.Use synonyms
Also
if too much Linking Words
money
Use synonyms
is spend
like that Change the verb form
is spent
people
will not have any Use synonyms
saving
for themselves Fix the agreement mistake
savings
at the end
of the family gathering.Linking Words
In addition
, their standard of living may decrease and will not be able to cope with Linking Words
the
modern society.
In conclusion,a lot of Correct article usage
apply
people
debate whether Use synonyms
money
should Use synonyms
be spend
extravagantly or not Change the verb form
be spent
be spending
with
the above reasonsChange preposition
for
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