There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developments in

technology

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in recent years has brought great impacts

to

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the lives of

individual

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an individual

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in

the

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society today. I strongly believe that the current positive changes in

technology

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has

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improved

people

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's lives. One of the main impact of

technology

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on individual's lives is that

,

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it

generate

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employment opportunities in different organizations.

People

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who are

computer

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literate have been able to be employed

to

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various organizations like airports, companies, banks, and hospitals. All these organizations depend on

technology

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in their

day to day

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activities.

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,

computer

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experts have been able to be employed

to

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in

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places like

bank

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banks

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and they make

use

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of

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computer

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computers

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to store their data.

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, many medical

practitioner

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practitioners

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have been considered for job

opportunity

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opportunities

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because of their knowledge of

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computer

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computers

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.

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,

development

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of

technology

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improves

level

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the level

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of communication. Many

people

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from various places have been able to communicate maximally through the

use

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of telephones, electronic

mails

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and other social media handles. To illustrate, a friend of mine was able to apply for a job inside her room,

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application was sent via electronic mail and the organization replied back within two days of application.

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,

people

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have been able to reach out to one another through the

use

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of telephone.

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,

technology

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has helped to reduce the workload at home and

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improved

means

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the means

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of transportation.Household chores like washing clothes and plates, have been made easier by the

use

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of washing

machine

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machines

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. Cars, aeroplanes, ships and trains have

serve

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as means of transportation for

people

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and goods.

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initially

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, I normally spend about three hours washing my clothes but with the help of

technology

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, I have been able to

use

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washing

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the washing

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machine for washing clothes

under

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in under

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thirty minutes.

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Furthermore

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I get to my place of work easily

buy

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driving my car. In summary,

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there are a lot of benefits attached to the advent of

technology

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but

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our daily activities should not be dependent on it.