There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Developments in
technology
in recent years has brought great impacts to
the lives of Change preposition
on
individual
in Add an article
an individual
the
society today. I strongly believe that the current positive changes in Correct article usage
apply
technology
has
improved Change the verb form
have
people
's lives.
One of the main impact of technology
on individual's lives is that,
itRemove the comma
apply
generate
employment opportunities in different organizations. Change the verb form
generates
People
who are computer
literate have been able to be employed to
various organizations like airports, companies, banks, and hospitals. All these organizations depend on Change preposition
in
technology
in their day to day
activities. Add a hyphen
day-to-day
For instance
, computer
experts have been able to be employed to
places like Change preposition
in
bank
and they make Fix the agreement mistake
banks
use
of computer
to store their data. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Also
, many medical practitioner
have been considered for job Change to a plural noun
practitioners
opportunity
because of their knowledge of Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
computer
. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Secondly
, development
of Correct article usage
the development
technology
improves level
of communication. Many Add an article
the level
people
from various places have been able to communicate maximally through the use
of telephones, electronic mails
and other social media handles. To illustrate, a friend of mine was able to apply for a job inside her room, Fix the agreement mistake
mail
this
application was sent via electronic mail and the organization replied back within two days of application. In addition
, people
have been able to reach out to one another through the use
of telephone.
However
, technology
has helped to reduce the workload at home and also
improved means
of transportation.Household chores like washing clothes and plates, have been made easier by the Correct article usage
the means
use
of washing machine
. Cars, aeroplanes, ships and trains have Fix the agreement mistake
machines
serve
as means of transportation for Change the verb form
served
people
and goods. For example
, initially
, I normally spend about three hours washing my clothes but with the help of technology
, I have been able to use
washing
machine for washing clothes Add an article
the washing
a washing
under
thirty minutes. Change preposition
in under
Furthermore
I get to my place of work easily Add a comma
,Furthermore
buy
driving my car.
In summary, Correct your spelling
by
although
there are a lot of benefits attached to the advent of technology
but
our daily activities should not be dependent on it.Remove the conjunction
apply
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