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The table below give information about sales of Fair trade labeled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The table below give information about sales of Fair trade labeled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The two tables
depicts
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sales
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 data of
coffee
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 and
banana
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 in two years in five European states.
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, it can be evident from the table, the
coffee
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saled
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sale
sales
 in
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UK
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the UK
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at
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 the
higest
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highest
trand
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trend
. In 2019 the
UK
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saled
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sales
 1.5millions of
euros
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 but in 2004 it reaches at 20milions of
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while
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 Switzerland at the maximum trend
about
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 the
saled
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sales
 of
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banana
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bananas
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. In 1999
saled
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sales
 rate of
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banana
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the banana
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15
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 but in 2004 it incline triple times of its original price
at
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 47
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
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.
Coffee
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sales
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 increases in
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the others
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others
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other
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 four countries in 2004 but
banana
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sales
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 in two countries the
swedan
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Swedan
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 and Danmark on reverse rates. From the first
tables
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table
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,the
coffee
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 rate in the
UK
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 at the maximum cost between
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the others
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others
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other
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 four states
..
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 In 1999,
coffee
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saled
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sales
 rates rose up 1.5 to 20 in 2004.
The
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Switzerland, at the second number the
coffee
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saled
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sales
salad
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 became double from its original
sales
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 in 2019.
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 Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
also
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 increase their
saled
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sales
salad
 from 3.6
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
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 to 4.7
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
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 in 1999 and 2004. The second
tables
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table
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 can be seen that
,
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the
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Switzerland, at
the
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its
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 peak level for
saled
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sales
in
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of
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banana
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bananas
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it
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apply
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increased its figures
15
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 to 47 in 1999
ans
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and
 2004. The second one the
UK
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 sour its
saled
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sales
salad
sale
1millions
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by 1millions
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 of
euros
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 to 5.5
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millions
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million
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of
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euros
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. As compared to
others
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 states, Sweden and Denmark declined
saled
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sale
sales
 rates in 2004 .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, banana, uk, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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