Pie charts shows the electricity production in France and Australia in 1980 and 2000.
To begin
, the pie charts provide information on the production of electricity
by different sources of fuel, in Australia
and France
, in 1980 and 2000. Overall
, in Australia
, the number of electricity
units
produced increased from 100 units
to 170 units
, in 1980 and 2000 respectively ,whereas
in France
, the value got almost doubled by 2000, compared to the amount of electricity
generated 20 years earlier.
First and foremost, in Australia
, the units
of electricity
produced by coal had more than doubled in 2000. Moreover
, coal was the main energy source in Australia
in both
years. However
, the usage of oil decreased by 8 units
in the year 2000. In 1980, the demand for natural gases had doubled to that of oil but, in 2000, the usage of both
sources had reduced significantly.Furthermore
, in France
,the main fuel sources were coal and natural gases in 1980, with a value of 25 units
each. Over a 20-year period of time, the demand for oil in the field of electricity
generation,
had slightly improved Remove the comma
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whereas
, the usage of natural gases showed a downward trend. In 2000, nuclear power was the most prominent source in France
, with 126 units
out of 180 units
in total.
In conclusion, the number of electricity
units
generated,
shows an upward trend in Remove the comma
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both
countries over time. However
, in Australia
, coal was the main contributor in both
1980 and 2000, while
in France
, nuclear power had become the main source by the year 2000.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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