You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask your friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter : Give details of your study plan Explain why you want to take up the part time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Caroline, Hope

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letter finds you well. There’s some really wonderful news I would like to share. I will be coming to Pennsylvania in January as an exchange student and will be graduating from CM University. As you know I’m pursuing my master's in Human-Computer Interaction at Carnegie Melon University, the college has decided to move me to the international campus considering my grades and experience. There’s still a lot of time for me to complete my project.

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like to take up a part-time job, for which I require your help. I would like to work in any IT company which will help me support my current education.

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job can be very useful to me for my everyday expenditures, and maybe saving some can help me clear my outstanding mortgage. Since you’re in the recruitment industry and have many connections, I would want your help in passing any opportunities to me if you find any. I look forward to hearing from you. Lots of Love, Keisha Thomas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

177 words

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