The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the number of professions and their salaries in the UK and the average

hours

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they work per week for each profession. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest

salary

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was for underground drivers,

while

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the least one

for

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nurses

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Moreover

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, firefighters got the highest working

hours

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On the other hand

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nurses

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' working

hours

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are the lowest. First of all, the

salary

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for the police started at 2100

pounds

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apply

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but ended at 2300

pounds

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after 3 years.

According to

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nurses

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, the numbers were similar during the beginning and the end reaching 1800 and 1900

pounds

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, respectively.

Next,

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the

salary

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of firefighters at the beginning was less than the one

at the end

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by 100

pounds

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Lastly

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, the

salary

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of underground drivers was 5000

pounds

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. After that, it increased slightly reaching 5100

pounds

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. By far, the

police

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police's

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average working

hours

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per week was 40

hours

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, which was higher than

nurses

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working

hours

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by exactly 2

hours

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. Interstingly, the firefighters working

hours

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were at the top of the table.

Finally

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, the least working

hours

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were done by the underground drivers.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, salary, nurses, pounds with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

184 words

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