The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the number of professions and their salaries in the UK and the average
hours
they work per week for each profession. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest
salary
was for underground drivers,
while
the least one
for
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was for
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nurses
.
Moreover
, firefighters got the highest working
hours
.
On the other hand
,
nurses
' working
hours
are the lowest. First of all, the
salary
for the police started at 2100
pounds
,
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but ended at 2300
pounds
after 3 years.
According to
nurses
, the numbers were similar during the beginning and the end reaching 1800 and 1900
pounds
, respectively.
Next,
the
salary
of firefighters at the beginning was less than the one
at the end
by 100
pounds
.
Lastly
, the
salary
of underground drivers was 5000
pounds
. After that, it increased slightly reaching 5100
pounds
. By far, the
police
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average working
hours
per week was 40
hours
, which was higher than
nurses
working
hours
by exactly 2
hours
. Interstingly, the firefighters working
hours
were at the top of the table.
Finally
, the least working
hours
were done by the underground drivers.
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