The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the number of professions and their salaries in the UK and the average
hours
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they work per week for each profession. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest
salary
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was for underground drivers,
while
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the least one
for
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nurses
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.
Moreover
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, firefighters got the highest working
hours
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.
On the other hand
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,
nurses
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' working
hours
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are the lowest. First of all, the
salary
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for the police started at 2100
pounds
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,
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but ended at 2300
pounds
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after 3 years.
According to
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nurses
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, the numbers were similar during the beginning and the end reaching 1800 and 1900
pounds
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, respectively.
Next,
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the
salary
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of firefighters at the beginning was less than the one
at the end
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by 100
pounds
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.
Lastly
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, the
salary
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of underground drivers was 5000
pounds
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. After that, it increased slightly reaching 5100
pounds
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. By far, the
police
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police's
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average working
hours
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per week was 40
hours
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, which was higher than
nurses
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working
hours
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by exactly 2
hours
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. Interstingly, the firefighters working
hours
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were at the top of the table.
Finally
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, the least working
hours
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were done by the underground drivers.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, salary, nurses, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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