The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and the table illustrate what did the Anthropology students do after their graduation and how big their salaries were after five years of job.
Overall
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, most of them preferred to work,
while
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some continued their studies or combined these two activities. At the same time, some individuals decided to relax after graduation.
It is clear that
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more than half of graduates (52%) found a full-time job, and 15% found a part-time one. That makes about 70% of students working after their studies. A reasonably small percentage of graduates wanted to continue their education or combine it with work – 8% and 5% respectively. More than ten per cent of the students did do any of it, and we do not know anything regarding the remaining 8% of them. Talking about salaries and occupations, the most successful candidates found themselves as freelance consultants or government workers – precisely 80% of them had more than 75k a year after 5-year employment. Those who work in private companies were less successful – half of them had a salary below
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number, most likely from 50.000 to 75.000.
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