You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while your are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this fiend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

#country #study #job #friend #lives #help #fiend #-give #plans #-explain #-suggest

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, It has been a long time since we

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were in touch . I hope you are well . The good news is that I am going to study in London .

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, I am writing

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letter to ask for your help . My parents will help me with some money but the accommodation in London is expensive for me so I need your help with finding a part-time Job starting at 7 pm as my

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lecture will end up at 5 pm .

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I can get enough time to go to work . I will study Dentistry as I always wish so I will need a weekend free to study . I will have lectures and practical work so dentistry needs a lot of work and effort .

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, can you suggest which type of jobs are present there and if it will be appropriate to my conditions

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asking if you can send me links to any recruiting groups on the social platform. I look forward to seeing you . Best wishes , Asma,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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