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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Modern society has been facing a problem surge in the number of abidance traditions where people moved to a new country.
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 essay will examine the conspicuous merits and possible drawbacks of starting to live in a new place and argue that the former outweighs the latter.
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 the usefulness of compliance customs and traditions can be supported as follows. Supporters who have moved argue that merging with society should follow the customs. For , instance recent research conducted by kz inquiries experts among the majority of Kazakhs emigrants
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 Russian traditional foods and feasts . Kazakhs who moved to Russia often eat folk foods .
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 it is not an exaggeration to say that the new place will be a significant impact on people. On the other ,hand it is worth noting that another place can give go against impacts . To clarify human who has weak mental health has an opportunity to change to the opposite side. Without , a doubt one should not overlook the fact that illegal things
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 would be interesting to emigrants. On the whole , both considerations have their own fervent advocates . ,
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 people should follow customs and traditions.
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