In many government like to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However some think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

While

it is widely claimed that the states should spend more money on the

arts

, some argue that those

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should use

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health and education. In the essay, I will discuss both views and

also

my perspective as the conclusion.

To begin

with, it might be sensible for some to believe that

arts

is

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significant, seeing that it provides various benefits.

For example

, it can be a part of tourist

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attraction

attractions

like Street

arts

, many tourists came to visit our country because of

this

and

this

creates income

to

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people in that area.

In addition

,

this

can make people relax as it is a part of the

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entertainment

entrainment

.

However

,

the

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numerous amount of funds are required to develop

this

.

Therefore

,

this

is the reason why the support from governments is necessary.

On the other hand

, the opponents of

this

idea might propose that

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are more important.

Firstly

, the citizens have knowledge from studying and

To conclude

,

although

it is undeniable that

arts

,I am of

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that governments should play a crucial role

on

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health and education since those help countries to be developed.