Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara or the Antartic, What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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It is true that with the development of networks and smart mobile phones, having an adventure to those far away and tough
places
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can be much more convenient than before. In my view, visiting a poor-conditioned district is pretty interesting, but
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life danger. On the one hand, we cannot deny that exploring nature can benefit us a lot, especially
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places
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that very few human beings have ever footed,
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as the Sahara desert.
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, taking an adventure like
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can give us confidence, feeling like a huge achievement we have made.
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, the
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people ever
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, the more attractive it would be. Human beings have the desire to have a look at those mysterious
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.
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,
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with difficult conditions are always beautiful, less polluted, and less modern, because being undeveloped in a sense means that the original beauty of the scenery is largely preserved.
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, serious danger may hide in beautiful scenes. We see news of tragedy every year. During those adventures, people may face
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extreme
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situations
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of water and food, which are basic life supplies.
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, very high or low
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temperatures
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can cause dangerous results,
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endanger life. Most importantly, the signal can be poor in those far away
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.
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between us and
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world may be cut suddenly, which not only can let us lose direction, but
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causes huge trouble on emergency calls when we face dangers. In a word, these dangerous situations may occur to any adventurers, even if they had taken the professional course before the visit. In conclusion, taking adventure to far away
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would be fun, but we should not dismiss the dangerous factors behind it.
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