The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart and figure compare the
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of a country in five categories between 2015 and 2016 and the Use synonyms
proportion
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change
in the above five categories in 2016 compared with 2015.
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