You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: •say what the participants liked about the hotel •explain why they were unhappy about the food •suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to provide you with feedback about a last
week's full-day meeting held for our company. I would like to share some thoughts which are received from my colleagues.
All personnel who were present at the conference loved the interior of your hotel. Especially the sea view from the 42nd floor. It was fascinating. Moreover
, they liked the sculptures placed in the reception area. It was delicate dolphins with fountains.
However
, I received unpleasant feedback about lunch. Multiple cuisines had trouble enjoying. For example
, chicken curry was too spicy and Biryani rice had less salt. As it was a main course overall
food was not up to the mark. What is more, by the time our CEO reached to buffet counter, half of the dishes were over. It was an embarrassing moment for everyone.
In order to avoid such
circumstances in future, I would like to suggest accessing the chefs periodically. You may consider reshuffling your kitchen staff. Additionally
, please consider tasting all the food before serving. Finally
, please make sure an adequate amount of food has been prepared according to
the number of main courses and side dishes.
I hope we will get a positive response. I am looking forward to seeing improvement in future events. Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Ajith KumarSubmitted by tb38 on
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