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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many
people
 love listening to
music
.
Music
 can be a useful tool for
people
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 communication across the boundaries of cultures and ages. I totally agree that
music
 can be described as a great
way
 for
people
 connecting together. There is no shortage of reasons for my stance. None are as significant as the fact that the melody from
music
 can motivate
people
 and become a common
language
 when listening to an upbeat melody, we will feel enthusiastic and move our
body
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bodies
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 in order to follow the
music
 beats unconsciously. We may not know the lyrics, but we will still use our body
language
 to follow the melody. In
this
way
,
music
 has become a common
language
 for
people
 with different backgrounds. K-pop
music
 is a case in point. The tide of K-pop
music
 has recently swept across the world, ranging from Africa, America, China and Indonesia. Apart from breaking
language
 barriers, K-pop
music
 lovers and
also
 from different ages. In
this
way
, It can be shown how
music
 can be used as a
language
 for communicating. It should
also
 be noted that playing musical instruments can bring
people
 together.
Music
 represents the culture of a country, both learning and playing musical instruments can know more about the culture.
For example
, there
is
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 some musicians played both Chinese and Western instruments in a show
such
 as Pipa, flute, piano and Eruth. In
this
way
,
this
 kind of
music
 shows contributes to cultural exchanges and the young and elderly can listen to the
music
 for understanding more. Under
this
 line of thinking,
music
 can become a tool for communicating and entertaining.
People
 with different backgrounds and cultures can share and enjoy the same kind of
music
 and
thus
 it represents the diversity of cultures in the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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