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In some city’s, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office building so people can build whatever they like. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Now a days
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people
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there
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their
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 financial status. In
main
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 city , the
people
earning
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to
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 high .so they are planning
built
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a
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more
design
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designs
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 and
adding
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 expensive
thing
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in
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 it.let see what is the advantage and
disadvantage
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. The
people
 from
middle
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 class and upper middle class , they more conscious about
there
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plan
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. Because they know what they need.
initially
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there
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plan
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concerned
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 department and got
there
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their
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 approval . It was better to get approval to proceed
further
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concern
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 department will
verifying
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 design specifications
according to
that
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 area where the building going to
built
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. Mostly, the
well settled
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people
are
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planned to
built
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well designed
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house
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houses
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showing
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 how wealthy we are . But they didn't
thinking
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 about
future
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 and what is
nessasity
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necessity
 to
spending
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to
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 much on that.
so
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 before planning something , need to think as much
possible
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 . We may discuss with
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well trained
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 designer . So plan
accordingly
 and get approval concerned department. In my point of view to construct
new
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 house or office some control measure is so important . It may not lead to any big accidents. It may ensure proper safety measures . My concern is specified team is
nessasary
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necessary
 to control
design
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the design
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 of new construction.Because it could reduce
accident
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accidents
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might
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be happen
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 to some
un identified
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unidentified
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