The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The given table presents data on the
number
of male and female
employees
and
factories
in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
Overall
, the
number
of male
employees
was consistently higher than that of females, except in 1861 and 1901.
In addition
, the total
number
of
employees
decreased over the 50-year period,
while
the
number
of
factories
increased substantially. Looking at the table in more detail, in 1851, there were almost 290,000 male
employees
and 190,000 female
employees
. After 50 years, the
number
of
employees
of both genders was approximately equal at around 300,000 each.
However
, in 1861, the
number
of female
employees
was higher than males at 160,000 and 130,000, respectively. In terms of the total
number
of
employees
and
factories
, the figure for the former was over 477,000 in 1851
,
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but decreased drastically to 61,000 in 1901.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
factories
increased from 225 in 1851 to 600 in 1901.
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