Bar graph shows the number of men and women college graduates

This

bar graph shows the

number

of both

women

and

men

college

graduates

from 1995 to 2015. Generally, the

number

of

men

college

graduates

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much higher than

women

graduates

through the years. In 1995, around 37000

women

graduated from

college

, which is less than 6000

graduates

of

men

. But in 2005, the total

number

of male

graduates

increased much more than in 1995. The

number

of male

graduates

multiplied by 17000 that year to 60000.

Whereas

the proportion of

women

graduates

extended by 3000, reached to 40000. In 2015, the total

number

of

graduates

increased even more, with male

graduates

boosted dramatically than in previous years

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77000.

On the other hand

, the

number

of female

graduates

also

increased to 50000, but the

number

is still much lower than the

number

of male

graduates

shown in that graph . In summary, the total

number

of

college

graduates

continuously increased

through

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the two decades, from 1995 to 2015.

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women

graduates

lower

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than

men

college

graduates

indicated

this

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bar graph display.