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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages for this development?

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Technology has improved significantly in
the
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people’s
life
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 and the way they
work
 recently. Up to now, people would travel to their place of
work
.
Although
, nowadays with Smartphones and
Internet
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the Internet
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 working has become
more and more easy
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. My own view is these technologies have more benefits than drawbacks. I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of distance
work
. On the one hand, distance
work
allow
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 workers
have
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 more personal space and liberty. Since
,
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 employees do not have any obligation, they do not have to transform a lot.
Also
, by using these electronic components workers can be available for 24 hours.
Moreover
, the capability of managing their own day will give people a chance to plan
thier
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their
 personal life outside of business.
On the other hand
,
these digital equipment
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 can limit actual communication between co-workers.
Due to
 online interactions, colleagues do not need actual communication.
As a result
,
these kind
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 of communication can
effect
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on
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thier
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their
 mental health.
For
this
 reason, some companies introduce mental health care services.
To conclude
,
although
,
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 distance
work
 has drawbacks, I believe working from home has many positive aspects
such
 as saving time and liberty.
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