The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
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The graph illustrates the
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of
margarine
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,
butter
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, low fat and reduced spreads on a daily basis for an individual from 1981 to 2007.
Overall
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,
margarine
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and
butter
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spreads were the least used item by the end of the period
whereas
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low fat
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and reduced spreads were the most famous.
To begin
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with, the usage of
margarine
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and
butter
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spreads were following the opposite trend from 1981 to 1986. So,
while
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the using of
margarine
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started at 140
grams
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and reached its peak of 160
grams
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,
butter
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spread
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started at just below ten
then
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it slightly declined to 80.
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, both of them were gradually falling from 1991 to 2007 till getting the same consumption of approximately 60. In 2007,
margarine
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spread
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was consumed less than
butter
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spread
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by almost 10
grams
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.
In contrast
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, low fat and reduced
spread
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started with an insignificant figure of around 10
grams
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as the lowest consumption of all spreads
at
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1996
then
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it dramatically peaked at 80
grams
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in 2001 and remained the most known product since
then
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams, spread with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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