You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
the line graph illustrates the number of visitors who are going to a museum in the Uk related to the daily hours from 9:00 am to 18:00 pm between the summer and winter seasons in the period 2003.
overall
, during the summer the average of visitors is sharply increased compared to the winter intake.
the maximum peak reached from the visitors is 1500 folks before noon during the warmer season, neverthless, during the rest of the day is still massive the mob, instead
of the winter period were the people are not used to go at the museum as the results show us with a slightly increasing of roughly 600 people at 12:00 am , after that time a visible drop and then
it keeping going to decrease until reached an absence of crowd in the afternoon from 14:30 until 18:00.Submitted by rossella.dipompeo on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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