some people think it is a good idea to wear a uniform at work . Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer with relevant examples from knowledge or experience.

Working in a
company
wearing a
uniform
code is easy to
recognise
. I agree
to
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the statement and
i
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will discuss
to
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this
essay why is important to use
uniform
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a uniform
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while
working.
To begin
with, uniforms are important to some
company
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companies
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to
recognise
the position you applied
.
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There is some
company
that their not required to wear
uniform
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a uniform
the uniform
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.
For instance
,
manager
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managers
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and
employee
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employees
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if they will not use
uniform
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uniforms
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we can not
recognise
them who is the
manager
and
staff
.
For example
, in
department
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a department
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store if there is any complaint about the service
customer
difficult to find the
manager
without the proper
uniform
.
However
, if you wear
uniform
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it can be easy to determine where you can ask for help or complaint
some
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issue
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issues
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Secondly
,
base
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in
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my previous experience in my
company
if you will not wear
uniform
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a uniform
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they give you some
sunction
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sanction
function
or penalty.
Thus
, need the employee to have
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a uniform
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uniform
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uniforms
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so the
customer
is easy
to
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determine who is
staff
or
manager
.
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For example
, when
i
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go to
grocery
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the grocery
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one of the
customer
asking to me about the price of the product and
i
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tell them that
im
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I'm
not
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the
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a
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staff
and it will
embarace
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embrace
because the
staff
is
jot
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not
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wearing
uniform
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a uniform
the uniform
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. So it is
impotant
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important
to
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customer
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customers
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to
recognise
the employee.
To conclude
, wearing a proper
uniform
in the
company
is
a
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best way to practise. So it can determine who is in the higher position.
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