When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people think that the utilization of

buildings

is more important than the external building. In my opinion, I partly concur with

this

idea. On the one hand, giving

such

importance to the use of

buildings

brings a great deal of benefits to construction corporations. First of all, because of investing in skyscrapers, building companies could attain a profit. Some

buildings

are constructed for many purposes

such

as entertainment, apartment, and service, which helps investors to increase interest

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Secondly

, the majority of people care more about the value of their

buildings

. In Vietnam,

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poor living in remote and mountainous areas are so underprivileged that they

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solely afford interior functions.

As a result

, I think that it is a beneficial criterion for individuals to concentrate on the utilization of the building.

On the other hand

, external

buildings

also

play a vital role in constructing a building. The first main reason is that it acts as a useful tool to appeal

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attract more customers.

For instance

, many businesses focus on exterior design to take photos and shoot videos, which is one of the most common factors to create some marketing strategies on the Internet through Facebook,

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, and Instagram.

Therefore

, it is easy to approach potential customers who are impressed by the outward appearance of skyscrapers. The second reason is that the architecture could have existed for a long time

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if they are unique and ancient. Take a

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pagoda as an example, with its introduction of 10 decades from 1049 to now. In conclusion,

although

both views have some justifiable merits, I believe that the use of

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buildings

is the best thing that allows individuals or organizations to achieve their own

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.