A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter tell them who you are and where you live; explain the nature of your complaint; say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir I am writing

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letter to you, as I was wondering if you could help me out with the menace of the broken

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in my hometown which is great trouble for the bodies in the

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. Well, I am Navneet Kaur, a responsible citizen of the nation

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I hold the position of a major member of the welfare community of Collingwood

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. Actually, I want to discuss

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the damaged pathway in my

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. Here, I want to seek your attention towards the fairground

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that connects the

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to the major city of Barrie and tourist place Wasaga Beach. Though it is a major connection between the city and another

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, it is getting harder for people to travel to other places because of the ruined track. I am writing

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to you not only from the welfare community side but from the side of all the individuals of the society as each and every male and female is suffering a delay in their work because of the

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condition.

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, I would like to request the improvement of the

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as soon as possible because all are expecting

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work to be done at an early stage

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the high amount of taxes they pay to the government for the maintenance of

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things in the country. I will be grateful if you help us to sort

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issue. Yours sincerely Navneet Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

242 words

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