The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables demonstrate revenues of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in five European nations from 1999 to 2004.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend
of
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both categories in five countries except
the
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reduction of
bananas
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in Belgium and Sweden.
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,
in
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the
UK
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had the best
increasing
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over the five-year period. First of all, in the
UK
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and
Switzerland
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,
coffee
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income was respectively 1.5
million
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and 3
million
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in 1999; after 5 years, in the
UK
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rose to 20
million
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when there was doubled growth in
Switzerland
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.
Bananas
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consumption
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the
UK
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people and Swiss was 15
million
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and 1
million
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respectively in 1999; in 2004, products have been sold up to 47
million
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in the
UK
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and 5.5
million
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in
Switzerland
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. Next to the 3 other countries. In 1999, Denmark was the highest with 1.8
million
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and the lowest in Sweden with 0.8
million
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in sales of
coffee
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whereas
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bananas
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proceeded. In the following 5 years, Danish had the best consumption of both commodities compared to Belgian and Swedes, with 2
million
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in
coffee
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and 4
million
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in
bananas
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. In conclusion, sales of
coffee
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was surged
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in all of
European
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the European
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countries.
However
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, Belgium and
Switzerland
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had declined
spending
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to spend
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in
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on
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bananas
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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