The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables demonstrate revenues of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in five European nations from 1999 to 2004.
Overall
, there was an upward trend
of
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both categories in five countries except
the
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reduction of
bananas
in Belgium and Sweden.
Moreover
,
in
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the
UK
had the best
increasing
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over the five-year period. First of all, in the
UK
and
Switzerland
,
coffee
income was respectively 1.5
million
and 3
million
in 1999; after 5 years, in the
UK
rose to 20
million
when there was doubled growth in
Switzerland
.
Bananas
consumption
of
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the
UK
people and Swiss was 15
million
and 1
million
respectively in 1999; in 2004, products have been sold up to 47
million
in the
UK
and 5.5
million
in
Switzerland
. Next to the 3 other countries. In 1999, Denmark was the highest with 1.8
million
and the lowest in Sweden with 0.8
million
in sales of
coffee
whereas
the opposite of
bananas
proceeded. In the following 5 years, Danish had the best consumption of both commodities compared to Belgian and Swedes, with 2
million
in
coffee
and 4
million
in
bananas
. In conclusion, sales of
coffee
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was surged
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in all of
European
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countries.
However
, Belgium and
Switzerland
had declined
spending
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in
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bananas
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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