The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way in which
lether
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other
leather
goods are produced. At the onset,
it is clear that
there are 11 stages in the process, beginning with drying
animals
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animals'
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skin
and culminating in leather products.
To begin
,
animals
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skin
is put in
open
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air to
drying
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. Afterwards, the
skin
is transported to a factory by truck . After that, the
skin
is washed in water and lime to remove dirt and fat .
Following
this
, the hide is soaked in lime in order to take
of
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the fur. Once
this
stage is completed, it is flattened using a roller.
The
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next stage , the
skin
is soaked in Tanina, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter for the purpose of colouring and protecting the
skin
.
Subsequently
, it is polished to help the
skin
look more beautiful.
Then
, the
skin
is delivered to another factory.
Finally
, leather products,
such
as bags, shoes, and balls are produced.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words skin with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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