The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

The pie charts illustrate the conclusion of a survey of boys’ and

girls

’ cultural recreational

activities

.

Overall

, boys had the tendency of spending their major leisure time

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doing outdoor

activities

and

girls

would rather dance for fun. Playing computer games accounted for the largest proportion of boys’ relaxed

activities

which stood at over a third of the total and it was over twice as much as that of

girls

’. The percentage of boys listening to music was the same as

girls

’ representing 10%.

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there were 2% of boys

reading

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books

while

more than a fifth of

girls

preferred doing

this

activity.

In addition

, basketball came as the second most popular boys’

activities

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for recreation which took up 26%.

On the other hand

skateboarding and soccer were very small percentages making up 28% combined. Dancing was the most popular recreational

pursuits

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among

girls

, it had the highest proportion at 27%.

Girls

also

fancied in Netball and

Gymnastic

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Gymnastics

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which took up 15% for the former and 11% for the latter.