ou work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do. explain what the company could do to help you. say how the course will be useful for your job.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to demand
leaving
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leave
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half an hour ago before the working time ends for three months. I
have seen
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a French Language
Course
advertisement yesterday and considered
to participate
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participating
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on behalf of both our company and
I
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me
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.
First,
I want to give more detail about the training
course
. It is held by a French government-supported and well-known language
course
locates
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very convenient to our company building. The
course
claims that every participant would get a level of B1 only in three months and with three-hour lessons daily which start at 17.30 pm. That's why I am giving details because I have to leave half an hour earlier than ritual if the company permits. I can compensate for
this
by working on my breaks in case you give any
toleration
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.
On the other hand
, as you know our chief executive officer wants to expand our connections to Western countries of Europe, especially France. It is obvious that it will be advantageous to our work as well if one of us could speak French.
To conclude
, I want you to take my request into consideration before our next meeting. Best regards.
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Task Response
Address the specific request for a training course, and explain how it will be useful for the job. Also, include a request for support from the company.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter lacks a clear structure and coherence. Use paragraphing for clear organization of ideas and develop a better introduction and conclusion.
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