ou work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do. explain what the company could do to help you. say how the course will be useful for your job.

#ou #work #company #advertisement #course #job #manager

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to demand

leaving

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leave

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half an hour ago before the working time ends for three months. I

have seen

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saw

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a French Language

Course

advertisement yesterday and considered

to participate

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participating

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on behalf of both our company and

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First,

I want to give more detail about the training

course

. It is held by a French government-supported and well-known language

course

locates

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very convenient to our company building. The

course

claims that every participant would get a level of B1 only in three months and with three-hour lessons daily which start at 17.30 pm. That's why I am giving details because I have to leave half an hour earlier than ritual if the company permits. I can compensate for

this

by working on my breaks in case you give any

toleration

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tolerance

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On the other hand

, as you know our chief executive officer wants to expand our connections to Western countries of Europe, especially France. It is obvious that it will be advantageous to our work as well if one of us could speak French.

To conclude

, I want you to take my request into consideration before our next meeting. Best regards.

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Task Response

Address the specific request for a training course, and explain how it will be useful for the job. Also, include a request for support from the company.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and coherence. Use paragraphing for clear organization of ideas and develop a better introduction and conclusion.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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