More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
More semi-developed
countries
receiving
help from overseas organizations to improve their development aims. It is argued that helping with Wrong verb form
receive
money
is essential but others claims
that asking for Change the verb form
claim
advices
and practical help Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
more
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is more
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,
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in
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belive
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believe
advices
and Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
practical
is more beneficial for long-term Fix the agreement mistake
practicals
goal
.
On the one hand, developing Fix the agreement mistake
goals
countries
need cash money
to improve themselves. In a short period of time
it is helping Add a comma
,time
to
them a lot. But, as they are developing Change preposition
apply
countries
, most of the time they are not capable to invest those
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that money
money
efficiently. That is
to say, they need to learn the way
using
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to use
money
in a
effective Change the article
an
way
to improve their economy. For example
, Turkey is the
one of the developing Change the article
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countries
and when they have cash money
from international organisations, they tend to use build higher buildings or invest on
fields which is useless for Change preposition
in
future
of Correct article usage
the future
nation
. Add an article
the nation
a nation
Therefore
, I believe that even it
is beneficial for Correct word choice
if it
short-term
, it is better to follow Correct article usage
the short-term
latter
thought.
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the latter
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another
hand, helping developing Correct quantifier usage
other
countries
with advices
and practices is Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
best
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the best
way
to help them. It is better teach
them Add the particle
to teach
the
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instead
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. Using those Correct pronoun usage
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advices
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advice
pieces of advice
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will improve countries
' life
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example
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countries
and try
to imitate their practices will help them in Wrong verb form
trying
a
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the
long-term
. Correct your spelling
long term
For instance
, Developed
country namely Germany , is investing their population to improve their practical side and give them life-saving Correct article usage
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advices
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advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
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in all fields. Correct article usage
the best
As a
result
they are producing nearly all engines in all sectors. I believe Add a comma
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this
school of thought is preferable because,
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apply
countries
need to understand long-term investments are more likely to help them to be developed country
.
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countries
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saves
a
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pieces of advice
bits of advice
advices
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improving
way
is more important for countries
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