More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

More semi-developed

countries

receiving

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help from overseas organizations to improve their development aims. It is argued that helping with

money

is essential but others

claims

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that asking for

advices

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advice

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and practical help

more

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is more

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essential.

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,

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receiving help financially is effective

in

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for

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short-term goals, l

belive

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believe

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that getting help with

advices

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advice

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and

practical

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practicals

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is more beneficial for long-term

goal

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. On the one hand, developing

countries

need cash

money

to improve themselves. In a short period of

time

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it is helping

to

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them a lot. But, as they are developing

countries

, most of the time they are not capable to invest

those

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that money

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money

efficiently.

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to say, they need to learn the

way

using

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money

in

a

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effective

way

to improve their economy.

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, Turkey is

the

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one of the developing

countries

and when they have cash

money

from international organisations, they tend to use build higher buildings or invest

on

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in

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fields which is useless for

future

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the future

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of

nation

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the nation

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.

Therefore

, I believe that even

it

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if it

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is beneficial for

short-term

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, it is better to follow

latter

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thought. On

the

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another

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other

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hand, helping developing

countries

with

advices

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advice

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and practices is

best

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the best

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way

to help them. It is better

teach

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to teach

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them

the

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how the fishing

instead

of

the

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giving

fish

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them fish

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. Using those

advices

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advice

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in a better

way

will improve

countries

'

life

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living

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standards and economy. Taking

example

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of developed

countries

and

try

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to imitate their practices will help them in

a

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the

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long-term

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long term

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.

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,

Developed

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a Developed

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country namely Germany , is investing their population to improve their practical side and give them life-saving

advices

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to be

best

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in all fields.

As a

result

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they are producing nearly all engines in all sectors. I believe

this

school of thought is preferable because

,

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countries

need to understand long-term investments are more likely to help them to be developed

country

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countries

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. In conclusion,

although

getting help financially

saving

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today, l claim that receiving help as

a

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apply

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advice

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advices

and

improve

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themselves in a practical

way

is more important for

countries

' fate.