The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph below gives information about
carbon
dioxide
(CO2) emissions
per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, Since 1967, we can see that carbon
dioxide
emissions
in Italy and Portugal gradually increased until 2007. By contrast
, United
Kingdom and Sweden had a falling trend between 1977 and 2007. Correct article usage
the United
However
, even the
Correct word choice
though the
emissions
in United
Kingdom reduced in the past 30 years, it still has the highest Correct article usage
the United
carbon
dioxide
emissions
.
In 1967, the United Kingdom was the country which produced the highest carbon
dioxide
(about 11 metric tonnes
). But in 1977, the carbon
dioxide
emissions
in Sweden rose rapidly, almost reached
the same level as the UK(around 10 metric Wrong verb form
reaching
tonnes
), but then
sharply went down in 1987(around 7 metric tonnes
).
On the other hand
, Portugal’s emissions
rose greatly to about 5 metric tonnes
in 2007. Meanwhile, Italy produced 7 metric tonnes
, which was more than Sweden in 1987, and went up to almost 8 metric tonnes
in 2007.Submitted by sw15923 on
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