Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Some would argue that climate change is
such
a pressing threat that
governments
should issue mandates to make
individuals
responsible for protecting the local environment. In my opinion,
this
might raise environmental awareness,
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it is not advisable as other steps are more likely to produce results. Those who suggest
individuals
should be compelled to accept responsibility are hoping for a united effort from the general public. The entire reason the Earth faces potential catastrophe is because of
over-population
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and consumer habits. There would be a noticeable improvement if
individuals
were forced to recycle, clean up litter in their
neighborhoods
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and reduce their carbon footprint by not using private vehicles, single-use plastics, and
airplanes
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. There is the added argument that it is important to
instill
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public duty in the mind of the average person. The government could fix these problems but that would only enable bad
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from citizens in the same way that an overly permissive parent engenders a spoiled child.
However
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the steps mentioned above would be marginal compared to the regulations
governments
can enact on various industries.
Individuals
might not follow the mandates from
governments
and they would be extremely difficult to enforce in populous nations that value individual liberty
such
as India, the United States, and Brazil. If
governments
instead
passed laws related to both small and large businesses they could combat global and local issues. Companies that contribute to air and water pollution could be severely fined and the businesses that profit the most from mass consumerism could be forced to institute more environmentally friendly policies. These simple reforms would have
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impact. In conclusion,
although
this
policy would help
individuals
become more active in their communities, it is more important for
governments
to enact sweeping regulations on corporations. In
this
way, the most progress will be made.
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