1. You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter - Give details of the situation - Describe the documents - Say what action you want the post office to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the fact that my letter was not delivered properly, so I was put in an awkward situation. I found a new job, and as the employer is located in another city, it was decided to sign documents remotely. I signed and sent them back

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Tuesday and the post office employee promised that my parcel will be delivered by the end of the week.

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, my first working day had to be on Monday

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, today is already Thursday and my letter has not been received. Another point concerning me is the private status of these documents. Actually, it is my work agreement and its content is under NDA.

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why I really hope any third parties would not see it and possibly use it for dishonest purposes. I think it would be great if you will contact a destination post office and figure out where my letter has been lost. If you need to know anything else, please do not hesitate to contact me by phone number +999743621. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,

Aliia

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Alicia

Umergalina

vaahmerovMon May 08 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

196 words

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