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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The two tables below portray the exchange
students
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 from universities in several
European
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 nations to Australia between 2007 and 2009 .
Overall
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 , it can be noticed that
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students
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 in Australia have outnumbered those of Aussies in Europe , French
students
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 in total were the most to go abroad .
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 with ,
European
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 learners in Australia continued to grow between the two years as the total number saw a surge from 189
students
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 to 226 in 2009 ,
however
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 , France and the United Kingdom saw fewer numbers in the year 2009 after losing 1 student and 5
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 respectively
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 the Netherlands remained the same at 36
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 for both years .
On the other hand
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 , the number of Aussies in
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 universities was the same in both 2007 and 2009 , with the numbers increasing in France and Germany by 21
students
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 and 8 respectively
on the contrary
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, the numbers declined in the other 3 states with the Netherlands witnessing the most dramatic loss of 14
students
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 in 2009 .
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